Borgatti |
The eerie
castle looked creepy. The town people refused to go inside; ghosts, they said. But
Mr. Pips didn’t fear ghosts. He even liked them. When he trod the path up the
hill for the first time, he thought he would become rich, as a matter of fact,
he was absolutely certain he would become rich. He had no other concern but to
find the chest. A nice man had sold him a map dated back to the 16th
century where a castle and a treasure chest were clearly marked, with an X of
all marks. How difficult could it be? So, he was bound to find it. There was
only one, let’s say, iffy problem; the ghosts had their hearts set on making
his life as miserable as they could. Time and time again, they would move the
chest from room to room, from floor to floor. They tried to scare him with wailing,
screaming, sighing. They dragged chains, rattled bones. Mr. Pips was immune to
all that. He was on a mission and he was stubborner than the ghosts. So, one
day, they decided to simply drop the chest in the living-room right by the
fireplace. When Mr. Pips saw the chest, he was beside himself. With the enthusiasm,
he dropped the candle he was holding on the overflow of curtain artistically
arranged to look like the tail of a dress. For some reason, the excess of dust
or the castle’s grudge, the curtain caught on fire immediately. He struggled to
put it out, hopelessly. The next morning, all burnt down but its outer walls,
the castle was destroyed, and still Mr. Pips wanted to find the gold. The chest
would be gone for sure, but not the gold. He looked for it throughout the whole
castle, or what remained of it. Nothing. No gold. Back in the living-room,
there was a chuckle. He turned around, but saw no one. The sound of a chain clanking
through the floor moved towards what remained of the fireplace. An X slowly
took shape on the ground and another and yet another; an uncanny laughter
followed the Xs out of the room. It was only then that Mr. Pips considered the
possibility of having been fooled. There was no treasure, there was no chest,
and there was no gold. There was only a handful of ghosts he didn’t even like
anymore. And that was the last the castle saw of Mr. Pips. At nightfall, the
ghosts moved back in with the chest. They hid it in the catacombs where no one
would look. But they would have to be vigilant. Every other century, a Mr. Pips
type showed up to ruin their peace. Besides, the treasure was theirs since 1548.
No way were they going to give it up without a fight, even if that meant a bit
of a spark.
You gotta love eerie castles. Nice snapshot. I like those Stephen King movies where you see this ominous looking house or castle. Rose Red was a pretty eerie story and movie. Nice story! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Victoria! I had to do some post-edit as I found a few mistakes! I better not re-read it or I'll want to tinker with the text over and over again! :) Oh, and King is great!
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